Documentary Homework

The Korean Netiquette video consisted of various differences from the "The Archive" and "Anxiety" video, within the aspect of composition and format. I noticed that the style of the Korean Netiquette video was more of a news report while the others were more similar to a documentary. The other videos also allowed us to view the struggles and issues that the main individuals were facing, these people were the ones who we followed throughout the documentary. Although each video has its own specific trials that are mentioned, the Korean Netiquette video is approaching it in a different way. The video is providing a solution that will aide in the problem that their society is facing, which is the issue with internet misuse and lack of computer knowledge. Even though the other two videos were more personal, we were able to relate to this video since these problems lie in our society as well. 

The Archive and Anxiety videos have shown consists of more bias than the other one, because the directors use of lighting, use of audio, and information that is presented to the viewer. For example, the director of the Anxiety video never announced whether they were for or agains Royce White making it to the NBA, but you do get a sense of favor directed towards Royce being drafted, because he made Royce the protagonist, he reveled his story, his struggles, and let his voice narrate some of the video. In the The Archive video, feel the need to be for him because of his situation. He's an blind, elderly, and has realized that the thing that he valued and spent so much time constructing, is now worthless in this society. The Korean Netiquette video had few bias moments, but other than that, the video was more informational than anything. 

Both the Anxiety video and The Archives video carry a theme, which is time. Anxiety is defined as nervousness of an imminent event, and with anxiety, one would desire for time to move forward, decreasing the duration of anxiousness. This theme of time is obviously noticed within the ticking sounds of the clock, which the director incorporated throughout the video. Or the theme can be identified within the nostalgic behavior of an old man who longs for things to be the way they were when he was younger. Both videos are very relatable because we as human beings desire control over an unstoppable force such as time. Whether you're living in the past or longing to decrease the time it takes to get to the future. Time is the most sought after aspects in which to have dominion over.

 

A sense of doubt can be identified throughout all of the videos. Doubt that leaves a cliff hanger at the end. Such as, doubt in Royce's ability to succeed in the NBA, society's doubts in the value of Paul's records, or the doubt that netiquette will succeed in a place such as America.

Scene Depiction - Rugby

The group that I have chosen to research was the rugby team. Leaving high school, where I participated in sports such as wrestling, football, track, and cheer leading with the with the idea of never doing sports again. I quickly regretted that decision and found myself searching for a sport as soon as I stepped on campus. Wrestling was considered to be my dominant sport, but because of my choice to go to the University of Kentucky, which no longer has a wrestling team, I had to find something new. Many friends and athletes said that rugby was almost as challenging as wrestling, which is why I was interested in it. This was the first time I heard about the University of Kentucky Rugby team, which was also when I found out that rugby was a sport.

Although the rugby team had their own field that they used during the season, they practiced on the Johnson Center field. This is an ideal location since the field was in clear view of those who worked out and trained in the Johnson Center, this allowed for a little-known sport such as rugby to receive recognition and spark the interest of other athletes. The conditioning consisted of sprinting and passing the rugby ball, which was something very new to me.

The rugby team consisted of mostly white men, mainly because they were the only ones willing to practice in 30 degree weather. Before practice begun, the athletes conversed about girls, wrestled, and called each other names such as “bitch” and “pussy”, just like any other athletic team. Though I was not a part of the team, the players came and talked to me about my sports history, and my interest in rugby. Most of them were just like me, with no prior experience or knowledge of rugby before joining the team. Being that rugby is not a very popular sport in America, let alone the state of Kentucky. This is why rugby is not an official sport at the University of Kentucky, making it harder for the team to obtain players with much experience of the game. Some of the players recognized me from last years’ preseason conditioning and referred to me as “speedy”, for obvious reasons.

The players were much taller than me and most of them were stronger as well. They then began conditioning and drilling by starting with sprints and passing the rugby ball to one another. The coaches constantly yelled and scolded the players when the drills did not go accordingly and they were punished by sprinting down the field. They then broke off into two groups, in what appeared to be categorized by strength and speed. I watched the group that was closest to my size and ability, as they practiced footwork, and passing the ball in order to improve hand-eye coordination. The practice appeared to be very similar to that of football, just without equipment or padding. This made me more comfortable, because I was able to relate something that was foreign to me, to something that I knew very well. As the players continue to run plays, they don’t seem competitive, they appear to just be having fun and enjoying the fact that they get to play the sport. The team always seemed to find a way to have a good time even when they were feeling fatigue.

Since rugby was originated in England, it is not a sport that we as Americans, grow up around and know due to cultural popularity. This is why I was skeptical about trying something that I’ve never seen or heard of before. But the members of the UK rugby team were willing to take time out to explain the basics of the sport to me. I had a chance to meet up with the team president, Curt Hart, who explained to me the things I needed to know about rugby. He stated that rugby is very similar to football, except for the fact that rugby is nothing like football. The ball is much larger than a football and it meant to be tossed laterally or backwards, rather than throwing it forward. Curt was first introduced to rugby when he visited South Africa, where rugby was very popular. After he returned to America enter his freshman year at the University of Kentucky, him and a friend, who was born in South Africa, actively sought out a place in which to play rugby. They then found a flyer for the UK Rugby team meeting, and showed up to practice. He has only been involved in rugby for two years, but his athletic background of soccer and tennis made it much easier to transfer his abilities to what was required of him from rugby. He goes on to say that, “The learning curve is extremely steep as with any sport, but after a month or so you develop sound basics and can play the game at a decent level.” After his first year of playing rugby, his coaches saw that he demonstrated a level head and people skills and assigned him to be the president of the rugby team.

I noticed that the players were very social, and it was a very good team building environment. The rugby team was not just a large group of athletes, but more like brothers, since these individuals all have the common bond of doing a sport that is so uncommon. Being that I am a very quiet and reserved person, I’m not able to open up and communicate with people, but I had no trouble communicating with them as they introduced themselves to me. My appearance caused them to be interested in my athletic abilities, and felt that I would be a good asset to the team.

After practice, the team resumed socializing with one another. The bond that these athletes have between each other mad me realize that I’m not looking for athletic involvement, I’m looking to belong to something, to have a group of friends that I have thing in common with. This and so much more, is what I found in the rugby team, they have a brotherhood along with athletics that I look forward to being a part of. Before I left, the coaches made me promise to come back and join in on a practice in the near future so that I could play for them in games to come.

Peer Review

I find peer review to be very helpful, because it gives me a chance to see what angle other students have taken in the assignment. It also allows me to improve on errors that may be in my essay.

During the writing workshop, I read Evan’s essay. He included very detailed information about his topic, but I wanted to know what made him interested in the topic and I saw that he should have more sources of information from different individuals.

I think that peer reviews simulate the response that I would receive from individuals who read it from my blog. It allows someone, other than myself, to read my essay with the same initial knowledge about the topic as a random individual. By doing this, I receive honest feedback that I would need in order to make my essay better.

Brandon Cleveland - Scene Depiction

In the movie, The Soloist, I've chosen to do my scene depiction on the "New Cello" scene. In this scene, Steve Lopez has given Nathaniel Ayers a new cello and lets him play a song. The setting of the scene takes place in a dim, dirty tunnel that is filled with traffic. Nathaniel obviously appears to be homeless, the way he dresses consists of a wide variety of worn out, colorful clothing. The way he verbalizes shows us that he has a mental disability which interfeers with his speech, causing his words to scatter along with his thoughts. Steve is an average individual, but he sees beyond the fact that Nathaniel is homeless and wants to help him. He realizes Nathaniel's musical talent contradicts his appearence. As Nathaniel begins to play, Steve is able to look beyond their differences, and sees that someone as beaten, and confused as Nathaniel can create something very beautiful. As he continues to play, Steve begins to neel down, I view this as a sign of equality. In life, vertical level differences indicate a sign of authority, power, and social classification. As Steve neels, this symbolizes that he is no longer looking down on Nathaniel, even though society expects that of him, due to the fact that he is in a much higher social class than Nathaniel. As he continues to play, the idea of Steve and Nathaniel being different from one another is no longer a factor. Steve does not see Nathaniel as a schizophrentic, homeless black man, instead he realizes that dispite their differences, Nathaniel is still a human being. Most people wouldn't listen to a single word that came out of his mouth, let alone the music he produces. This shows us that the setting, the wardrobe, and the character chosen for this specific scene, were all meant to enhance the irony of the music that is played by Nathaniel in this specific environment. This helps the song that is played on the cello stand out more, due to the fact that it is very contradicting to the environment. By doing so, it shows us that Nathaniel has talents and abilities that exceed way beyond what we expect of him, which puts us in the same position as the rest of society, causing us to be amazed at his talent.

Research Paper

I will be doing my research on the rugby team. I have contacted the club president, asking permission to do so. I have chosen this topic because I a want to get involved in sports, and rugby is one that I want to consider.

Speech Evaluation

While watching my presentation, I was able to verify the things I thought I did wrong during my speech, which are also the things that I feared the most. I noticed that I was not comfortable with the topic, because, while conducting the speech, I would constantly stray off topic and what my main focus should be. I saw that I was trying to remember a speech, rather than explaining details about myself. I also remained in the same monotonic speech throughout the entire presentation. Although, I did not constantly keep moving nor remain in one spot, I lacked in some nonverbal aspects of my speech. Next time, I will work towards remembering what nonverbal actions to do, rather than my actual speech. Because with the time I am given to write and remember the speech, I would be better off going up there and comfortably talking about my topic, than attempting to cram and remember what I wrote on paper. I will also practice my speech in front of other friends in order to simulate the environment in which I will be presenting in. I will also remember to focus on the topic that is presented to the class, rather than go off and say what I feel.

"Rise of the NBA Nerds" Response

In Wesley Morris' essay, "Rise of the NBA Nerd: Basketball Style and Black Identity". Morris' main point was that black athletes have adopted a different, more "nerdy" style. He believes that NBA stars, such as Kevin Durant and LeBron James are changing their attire because it is what has become popular in black culture. Morris states that it has become a trend, which was set by hip hop artist like Kanye West, that allowed African Americans who viewed themselves as outcasts or different from others, to physically show that by dressing contradictary to ethnic stereotype.

As an athlete, I agree with this act. I believe that these NBA players are choosing the suburban style, because it makes them different. When you look at an athlete, you see the similar height and build, but nothing that makes these African American basketball stars stand-out from each other at first glance. An example of this would be former University of Kentucky NCAA All-Star, Anthony Davis, who is not only known for his impressive skills in basketball, but for having a very noticable unibrow. Davis has refused to remove this blemish because it has become popular and made him stand-out from the rest. Even though his unibrow make him appear undesirable, he kept the flaw because his skills could compensate for what he lacked in appearance

The athletes who choose to dress differently from the stereotypical NBA stars, are the ones who receive the most publicity for their athletic abilities. In an effort to standout from the ones who are at a lower skill level, they dress differently to show themselves and others, that they are in a class above their competition.

These athletes may also be doing this in order to indirectly intemediate their opponents. In sporting events, their appearance says, "They can dress oddly because they are comfortable with what they do", which can be intimidating to an opponent that is anxious to begin with. Also, the clothing isn't just seen as different, the attire that is chosen specifically because it appears to be the attire of someone who is less athleticly gifted. It forces the opposing team to feel inadiquate, if the team that was victorious just so happens to consensually wear a sweater vest and bow tie.

This style has mainly become popular to celebrities and other athletes, because it satisfies the egotistical mindset. If people who were less popular or talented attempted to wear this style of clothing, they would be classified as an outcast. These celebrities know that they're popular, that they're worshipped, that whatever they do will automatically considered as stylish, and they know that they are the best at what they do, therefore they feel that they can afford to do something that would be seen as social suicide if a normal person were to do the same exact thing. This level of megalomania allows these all-stars to know that people respect them, and they can afford to wear what they want, because no one is going to negatively judge them if they still have the same level of talent.

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I believe that these athletes should be able to wear what they please, reguardless of them doing it for all the wrong reasons, rather than doing it because they feel that it's normal. If our society would like to see its idols in normal attire, then I suggest that they ignore the fact that these athletes are even wearing this odd clothing. It's an obvious attempt at gaining attention from others, the trend will eventually pass and athletes will mature beyond that adolecent mindset of wanting attention for playing dress up.After all, we're refering to NBA stars, the people who make a living by playing a kids game. They didn't have to acquire an education or stay in school in order to be successful. If we allow these people to make a living by playing a sport, then I doubt we should expected them to take life seriously, let alone the way they dress.